Tuesday, May 22, 2012
INTER-NOT
You log-on.
Your eyes are inanimate pixels.
You exude no masculinity.
Your language is a flat-argot.
You pose a stilted image.
I meet you in-person.
I see the sparkle in your green eyes.
I imbibe your masculinity.
I hold your hand, and know,
this is the electricity,
which I seek.
©TPuma/MMXII
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you nailed it!!!
ReplyDeleteI wrot my rough draft and placed it under comments for astronomy. (great poem by the way!!) Since there has been no e mail to my adress (eg.free2rhyme67@yahoo.com)or comment behind my writing; I can only imagine that you found it offensive. So I apologise. I am sorry I posted it. I really didnt want to offend anyone; If I knew how to take it down I would. I am sorry and will not write anymore poems that may be interpreted as pornografic or offensive. I again am sorry. I wish i knew another way to contact you other than posting on your site; I spoke to you on the phone last spring, but I have lost that phone so you are no longer in my contacts. I am so sorry if I crossed the line between art and porn. I simply wanted to express what I was feeling; The verses that rhyme are what was happening on the outside' and the verses that did not rhyme was representing what was going thru my head at the time. I was trying to be cleaver; and apparently I missed the mark.
ReplyDeleteAgain I am sorry. As much as I want to meet you in person and show you more of my poems;Unless I hear different,I wont bother you again.
I sent u an email.
ReplyDeleteI sent emails to free2rhyme67@yahoo.com.
ReplyDeleteThey come back as undelivable.
U must send me a valid email address.
u know my email.
So i can send u the critique i wrote of your poem.